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Ashes on the Promenade

by | May 25, 2025 | Slow-burning tension

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Ashes on the Promenade

Chapter 1: The Burned Heart of Marleaux

Dawn crept reluctantly into Marleaux, painting the pastel facades of the square with a pale, funereal light. The once-proud city, now a shivering relic on the coast, bore the scars of neglect—salt-stained walls, shuttered cafes, the echoing laughter of tourists long gone. Here, secrets hid behind every faded door. In the town square, smoke still curled from the charred remains of a makeshift stall. Blackened wood and twisted metal marked the perimeter, cordons strung by the Marleaux Coastal Constabulary, their uniforms shabby and anxious. The air was thick with the ghost of burned fish and singed paper, the scent carrying over the old cobblestones to the silent, watching windows above. A white evidence van idled by the curb, engine grumbling. From it emerged the Serious Crimes Unit: Mira Lorne, auburn hair pulled into a knot, dark coat brushing her knees, surveyed the scene with tired green eyes. She moved slowly, deliberate, as if mapping the grief etched into the town itself. Behind her strode Yara Novik, all broad-shouldered presence and clipped movements, pressing the local constables back with a gesture. Elias Vann trailed, eyes darting to every surveillance camera and phone—he already had a tablet in hand, his thumb flicking through network logs. Dr. Ivo Grell knelt by the debris, rolling gloves over his long fingers, already murmuring to himself. Celeste Arbour hovered at the cordon, scarf trailing, her gaze distant as she catalogued every shifting shadow and bystander. Mira knelt by the stall’s remains. The fire had gutted everything—crates of salted fish, handwritten ledgers, a battered cash tin. But what caught her attention was the outline—charred, unmistakably human—where flame had taken life as well as livelihood. Superintendent Faure, his badge dulled by years of salt air, approached with a grimace. “It was the night watch who found it. Fire started shortly after midnight. Local say the victim—a migrant from Relyan, name of Yusef Tamazi—slept here most nights. He ran the stall for the co-op.” Yara’s eyes narrowed. “Witnesses?” “Only the cleaning crews, and some night drifters,” Faure muttered, glancing over his shoulder as if secrets might be listening. “But… there’s talk. The co-op’s funds, they say, have been off. Missing money. Some think Yusef stole it. Others say someone wanted him gone.” Mira tapped her pen to her chin, letting silence pool. “And the fire?” “Accelerant, looks like. Engine degreaser. But… no sign of forced entry, not much left of the cash tin.” Faure looked at Mira, voice dropping. “We’d have called this a tragic accident, but the press is sniffing for foul play. And your lot—” he jerked his head at the SCU—“they’re already making the locals nervous.” Mira rose, her gaze sweeping the square: the closed bakery with its salt-streaked sign; the window above, curtains twitching. “Let’s get to work,” she said, voice low. She and Yara began a slow circle. Elias hovered by the stall, scanning for signal remnants, his glasses fogged. Dr. Grell, already sifting through ash, muttered, “No heavy charring to the bones. Victim died before the fire fully took hold. Signs of blunt trauma to the head.” Mira noted this, heart sinking. Arson to cover murder. Or… a desperate escalation in a place with too many ghosts. She glanced at Elias. “Anything?” “Something odd. The local mesh network saw a device connect here an hour before the fire—MAC address spoofed, but I can try to trace it. There’s also—” His voice faltered, eyes flicking to the onlookers. “I thought I saw someone familiar in the crowd, but maybe I’m imagining things.” Yara crackled her knuckles. “We need to talk to the co-op. And anyone who’d want Yusef dead.” Mira nodded, eyes fixed on the scorched outline. “Start with the living. They always talk. The dead… we’ll have to listen harder.” Above them, the pastel facades watched with shuttered patience, as if Marleaux itself was holding its breath. —

Chapter 2: Shadows Behind Pastel Walls

The SCU’s mobile lab van, parked on a side street, hummed with activity. Inside, plastic crates of evidence lined the walls, and the digital hum of Elias’s laptop underscored the tension. Marleaux’s sea breeze crept in, carrying the brine and rot of old secrets. Yara Novik sat at the cramped table, scrawling her scene notes in blocky caps: “NO SIGNS OF FORCED ENTRY. ACCELERANT—ENGINE DEGREASER. VICTIM: BLUNT FORCE HEAD TRAUMA.” Her jaw set, she turned to Mira, who sat, silent and unblinking, reviewing the victim’s photo—a man of forty, with kind eyes and the wary posture of one who’d spent years surviving at the margins. Celeste paced the narrow aisle, shuffling color-coded files. “Yusef Tamazi arrived from Relyan three years ago. No criminal record. Found work with the Marleaux Market Co-Op—selling salted fish, local spices, some handcrafts. He sent remittances home every month. Until two months ago, when the payments stopped.” Yara frowned. “Missing money. But he lived rough, slept behind the stall. Doesn’t fit an embezzler’s profile.” Celeste nodded. “Unless he was hiding something. Or protecting someone.” Elias, peering at his screen, called out, “Got something. The device that connected to the mesh network before the fire—it’s not Yusef’s. Registered to an Amira Bouchard. I checked: she’s treasurer for the market co-op. Her signal pings near the square at 11:03pm. Fire starts at 12:10am.” Mira’s pen stilled at her chin. “Could be nothing. Or she met with Yusef. Or… she’s involved.” Dr. Grell, who’d just entered with a tray of ash samples, lit a cigarette at the open window. “The accelerant was poured fast, splashed along the back of the stall. Whoever did this knew the layout, wanted it to burn hot and quick. And there’s this—” He held up a charred scrap. On it, Mira saw the faintest trace of handwriting, blackened by fire but not entirely lost. Celeste’s eyes widened. “May I?” She took the evidence, turning it in the light. “Some sort of note. I’ll enhance the image—see if we can recover the handwriting.” Yara cracked her knuckles. “Time to talk to Amira Bouchard.” Mira nodded. “And we need to check the co-op’s accounts. If funds are missing, we’ll trace where they went.” Outside, the city’s faded pastel walls glowed as the sun rose higher, but the chill in the square remained. From a window, a curtain twitched. Someone watched, always. —

Chapter 3: The Co-Op’s Fractured Trust

Marleaux Market Co-Op sat just off the square, in a squat building painted the blue of an old postcard, its paint flaking in strips. Inside, the air was thick with the tang of salt and the buzz of anxious conversation. Vendors huddled in corners, eyes wary as the SCU entered. Amira Bouchard, the treasurer, was waiting in her small office—a cramped space jammed with receipts and battered ledgers. She was a woman in her late thirties, her posture stiff, dark eyes rimmed with sleeplessness. As Yara and Mira entered, she rose, smoothing her blouse. “Are you here about Yusef?” Her voice was taut, pitched between anger and fear. “He didn’t deserve this. None of us did.” Mira, gentle, gestured to a chair. “We’re sorry for your loss. We’re trying to understand what happened. When did you last see him?” Amira clutched a ledger defensively. “Last night. I came to square up the accounts, as I do every Thursday. Yusef was… distracted. Kept looking over his shoulder. He said someone was threatening him—wanted money. I told him to go to the police, but—” She shook her head. “He didn’t trust them.” Yara interjected, voice blunt. “Your device was logged at the scene an hour before the fire. Why?” Amira flushed. “I—left my phone in the stall. I’d been updating the co-op’s accounts. Yusef said he’d keep it safe till morning. I went home, I swear. My husband can vouch for me.” Mira let silence stretch, tapping her pen to her chin. “Are co-op funds missing?” Amira’s jaw clamped shut. “Some money’s gone, yes. But it’s not what you think. We suspect someone’s been siphoning from the pooled market funds for months. Yusef was the one who noticed. He said he’d found proof.” Celeste, standing in the doorway, leaned in. “Did he say who?” Amira shook her head. “No. But he was scared. He said if he disappeared, the truth would come out. He was going to leave something… a message. I don’t know if he did.” Yara’s eyes narrowed. “Who else knew about the missing funds?” “Only me. And… maybe one or two senior vendors. Look, we’re not thieves. We’re just trying to survive here.” Mira studied her, searching for cracks. “Thank you, Amira. We’ll need access to your ledgers. And your husband’s statement.” Amira nodded, biting her lip. “Will you find who did this? Will you—will you clear his name?” Mira’s answer was gentle, but edged with steel. “We’ll find the truth.” Outside, as they stepped into the salty air, Yara muttered, “She’s hiding something. But what?” Elias, waiting by the van, signaled urgently. “You need to see what I found in the co-op’s digital records.” —

Chapter 4: Ghosts in the Ledger

Back in the mobile lab van, Elias Vann hunched over his laptop, the glow illuminating his anxious face. Mira and Yara leaned in as he scrolled through the co-op’s digital ledgers, lines of numbers flickering past. “Someone’s been very clever,” Elias began, voice quickening with excitement. “Every week, small transfers—never more than a hundred credits—wired to a shell account. I traced the IP address used to authorize the transfers. Most originate from the square’s public mesh, but last night’s attempt came from a different subnet—registered to a ‘Seaside Wireless’ in Clifftop Estates.” Yara frowned. “The old mansions. Who’d have access to those?” Elias shrugged. “That’s the thing. It’s a restricted signal—requires a passcode only residents or maintenance staff would have. And here’s the kicker—” He clicked, displaying a timestamp. “Last night, at 10:41pm, someone tried to move three thousand credits. The attempt failed—Yusef’s credentials were rejected. Half an hour later, Amira’s device pings the square. Then the fire.” Mira’s mind spun through possibilities. “So the embezzler tried for a big score, failed, then—what? Covered their tracks with fire?” Celeste, sitting cross-legged in the corner, murmured, “Or someone tried to stop them. Two motives—greed and fear.” Yara cracked her knuckles, the sound sharp in the small space. “Who owns property in Clifftop Estates?” Celeste was ready. “Mostly absentee landlords, but one name comes up—Geraldine Faure. Superintendent Faure’s sister. She manages several rentals, some empty, some leased to seasonal workers.” A beat of charged silence. Mira’s gaze flicked to the window, where the Marleaux Constabulary’s battered patrol car still idled. Elias broke the tension, pushing his glasses up. “And there’s something else. The note Dr. Grell found—the handwriting. I ran it through the province’s database. There’s a partial match. But it’s not Yusef or Amira. It’s… Superintendent Faure. At least a 70% correlation.” Yara’s face hardened. “That’s a hell of a coincidence.” Celeste circled the van, muttering. “Red herring, or tangled loyalties?” Mira’s mind chased the shapes of secrets behind pastel walls. “We need to talk to Faure. And to Geraldine. Carefully.” Outside, Marleaux’s square felt suddenly smaller, the shadows lengthening as dusk crept in. —

Chapter 5: The Superintendent’s Crossroads

Superintendent Corentin Faure’s office overlooked both the square and the sea—a view he rarely seemed to enjoy. Maps and old citations lined the walls, but today the room was heavy with unease. The scent of strong coffee mingled with nervous sweat. Faure sat behind his desk, fingers steepled, as Mira and Yara entered. He seemed older now—lines deeper, gaze wary. Mira spoke first, voice soft. “You knew Yusef Tamazi, didn’t you?” Faure didn’t flinch. “Everyone in the square knows everyone. Migrant or local, it doesn’t matter.” Yara pressed. “Your sister’s rental network—funds were funneled through one of her properties last night. And your handwriting is a near-match to a note found in the ashes.” Faure exhaled, shoulders sagging. “Geraldine rents rooms to make ends meet. I don’t manage her affairs.” Mira let silence work its way in. “Superintendent… The co-op funds were being stolen. Someone tried to cover it up with fire. Did you know?” Something flickered in Faure’s eyes. “I… suspected. There’s a lot of desperation in this city. Smuggling, theft. My own officers barely make rent. But Yusef was no thief. He came to me twice, said he’d found proof of someone skimming the co-op. He was scared for his life. I told him to keep his head down, that I’d look into it quietly.” Yara’s voice was harsh. “And did you?” Faure’s face was bitter. “I tried. But every time I dug, I hit a wall—old friends, powerful vendors, even my own people. The square has teeth.” Mira’s next question was gentle. “The note. Did you write it?” Faure looked away. “No. But I did leave Yusef a warning—told him to write down what he knew, hide it where someone would find it if he disappeared. I wanted to protect him, not…” He shook his head, grief and guilt mingling. Mira studied him, searching for false notes. “We need to speak with your sister.” Faure nodded, defeated. “She’s at Clifftop Estates. I’ll call ahead.” As they left, Yara’s jaw was set like stone. “He’s hiding something. Or someone he loves is.” Mira stared out at the grey sea, the salt wind biting. It felt as if Marleaux itself was struggling to breathe, its secrets pressing against the walls. —

Chapter 6: Clifftop Echoes

Clifftop Estates was a warren of faded grandeur—boarded windows, rusted gates, and overgrown gardens. The sea crashed below, relentless as memory. Geraldine Faure’s house stood apart, its once-white facade streaked with mildew. She greeted the SCU at the door, tall and elegant, her eyes hard as granite. The parlor, lined with old portraits and the faint scent of cigarette smoke, was immaculate but cold. “You’re here about the fire,” she said, as if daring them to accuse her. Mira met her gaze. “Your property’s Wi-Fi was used in the attempt to move co-op funds last night. We need to know who had access.” Geraldine’s lips curled. “Half my tenants are seasonal. I rarely see them. But last night… I was hosting a card game. Three friends, all regulars. I didn’t leave the house.” Yara prowled the room, scanning for signs of recent visitors. “Any of your guests have financial trouble? Any connection to the market?” Geraldine’s eyes narrowed. “This is Marleaux. Everyone has trouble. But my friends are old money. If you’re looking for thieves, look elsewhere.” Mira pressed. “Did you know Yusef Tamazi?” A flicker, almost imperceptible. “Only by sight. He bought fish from one of my stalls.” Celeste, quiet until now, stepped forward. “Someone tried to send money from your property. Did anyone use your internet?” Geraldine’s mask slipped, just for a heartbeat. “There was a power cut around ten. My wireless dropped. Anyone could have logged on if they were close enough.” Elias, checking his tablet, spoke up. “The access point required a passcode. Not easy to guess.” Geraldine bristled. “You think I burned the square? For what—some fishmonger’s pocket change?” The room crackled with tension. Mira, noting Geraldine’s composure, changed tack. “If you recall anything else—a stranger near your gate, a missing device, anything—please let us know.” As they left, Celeste lingered, scanning the entryway. Her eyes caught on a faded flyer tacked to the corkboard by the door—a charity event in the square, two weeks ago. Yusef’s name among the volunteers. She snapped a photo. Yara muttered, “Red herring. She’s hiding something, but not the right something.” Mira agreed. The real connection still eluded them, hiding in plain sight. —

Chapter 7: The Night Watcher

Back in the square, night had fallen. The pastel walls glimmered in the sodium glow of streetlamps, shadows pooling thick in the alleys. Mira and Yara met with the night watchman, Henri Duvac, a thin man with a grizzled beard and a limp. He clutched a battered thermos, eyes flicking nervously to the burned stall. “I didn’t see nothing, I swear,” he rasped. “I just do my rounds, keep the kids from breaking windows.” Mira’s voice was low, coaxing. “Any unusual activity last night? Anyone hanging around?” Duvac hesitated. “There was someone, maybe. Saw a figure near the co-op stall—hood up, moving quick. Thought it was just one of the market boys, but… after the fire, I wondered.” Yara pressed. “You recognize them?” He shook his head. “Too dark. But… they dropped something as they left. I picked it up, but didn’t think it mattered.” He fished in his coat, producing a keychain—a cheap plastic charm from Relyan, the kind sold in the market. Mira took it, turning it over. “Yusef’s?” “Could be. Or someone who wanted it to look that way.” Celeste, who had joined them, murmured, “A planted clue. Or a message.” The watchman’s eyes darted. “They say you’re here to help. But folks are scared. The co-op’s all some people have. If you dig too deep, you’ll find things best left alone.” Yara’s smile was thin. “That’s our job.” As they walked back, Mira clutched the charm, feeling the weight of someone else’s fear. Was it a warning? Or bait? Elias pinged Mira on comms. “I just got a strange ping on the mesh network. Someone’s trying to access the co-op’s files remotely. I’m tracing it—signal’s coming from the Fisherman’s Wharf.” Yara’s eyes blazed. “Let’s move.” —

Chapter 8: Wharf Shadows and Secrets

The Fisherman’s Wharf lay at the city’s edge, where nets flapped in the wind and the tang of brine cut through the night. The SCU moved silently, Elias leading them to a battered warehouse, its windows glowing with pale blue light. Inside, the smell of old fish and diesel hung heavy. At a battered workstation, a young man hunched over a laptop—eyes wild, hands shaking. He looked up, startled, as Yara and Mira approached. “Don’t move,” Yara ordered, voice iron. The boy—late teens, face smudged with salt and fear—raised his hands. “I’m not a thief! I just wanted to know who killed him!” Mira crouched beside him, voice soft. “Who are you?” “I—I’m Malik. Yusef was… he looked out for me. Gave me odd jobs when no one else would. I heard he was dead. I hacked the co-op account to see if anyone blamed him.” Elias examined the screen. “He’s telling the truth. He’s just looking.” Malik’s eyes brimmed with tears. “They’re saying he took the money. But he—he was trying to catch the real thief. He left a note, said if anything happened, it would all make sense. But I can’t find it.” Celeste, pacing, murmured, “Missing message. Where would Yusef hide something he wanted found?” Malik shook his head. “He loved the old market bell. Said it was the only thing that never changed.” Yara nodded. “Let’s check the bell tower.” Malik hugged himself, voice breaking. “He didn’t deserve what happened.” Mira rested a hand on his shoulder. “We’ll find the truth.” Outside, the wind howled. But for the first time, Mira sensed the shape of the answer—hidden high above, where only the desperate dared to look. —

Chapter 9: The Bell Tower’s Secret

The market bell tower rose above the square like a finger pointing to judgment. Its spiral steps, slick with moss and brine, echoed with the footfalls of the SCU as they climbed, flashlights piercing the gloom. At the top, beneath the great iron bell, Mira searched. Her fingers brushed over the old stone, finding a loose brick. Behind it, wrapped in oilskin, was a folded note. She handed it to Celeste, who carefully unwrapped it. The writing, shaky but certain, was Yusef’s. “To whoever finds this: If I am gone, it means I have failed. The thief is someone close, someone afraid. I tried to confront them, but they were desperate. Amira knows more than she admits. Forgive me.” Yara scowled. “He confronted someone. They panicked.” Elias, scanning the handwriting, frowned. “But there’s more—a second note, tucked in the folds.” Celeste read: “I forgive you. I know you meant only to protect what you love. But secrets burn.” The team descended in silence, the truth flickering like the bell’s tarnished brass. —

Chapter 10: Ashes and Answers

In the mobile van, the pieces came together. Yara reviewed witness statements. Celeste mapped connections with colored threads. Elias monitored the mesh network for new activity. Mira, lost in thought, replayed every interview. The double motive—greed, fear. The planted clues. The personal connection. Her comms buzzed. Elias, voice urgent: “Mira, you need to see this. I got a call from my grandmother. She says a woman named Sabria came to her door, asking strange questions about the co-op—about Yusef. She matched the description of Amira’s cousin, who’s been missing for days.” Yara’s eyes widened. “We never asked about family.” Celeste checked her files. “Sabria Bouchard. Amira’s cousin, recently evicted from her apartment in Clifftop Estates. Last seen near the square the night of the fire.” Mira’s pulse quickened. “Let’s bring in Amira. And Sabria, if we can find her.” In the interrogation room—bare walls, harsh light—Amira sat, trembling. When Mira mentioned her cousin’s name, Amira broke. “She came to me that night. Desperate—said she’d been stealing from the co-op, just a little at first, to pay rent. Yusef found out. He confronted her in the square. I was supposed to talk to him, to make peace.” Yara’s voice was cold. “But you didn’t.” Amira sobbed. “I was late. Sabria panicked. She—she hit him. Didn’t mean to kill him. The fire… that was me. I wanted to destroy the records, to protect her. I splashed the degreaser, set the fire. I didn’t know he was already dead.” Celeste’s voice, gentle: “So you both had motive. Sabria stole, you tried to protect her.” The room fell silent, grief and guilt thickening the air. Mira nodded slowly. “You tried to save family, but only burned yourselves.” Amira’s tears fell unheeded. “Yusef was kind. He deserved better. I’ll pay for what I did.” Yara’s jaw was grim. “You will.” The case, Mira realized, had always been about desperation—the kind that grows in the cracks of a city left to rot. —

Chapter 11: Truth in the Ashes

The press gathered in the square, cameras flashing, as Superintendent Faure gave a statement—measured words, the truth finally spoken. Amira and Sabria Bouchard were taken into custody, charged with manslaughter and arson. The co-op’s accounts were frozen, pending an audit. Malik, standing by the ruined stall, wept openly. Mira joined him, silent. She handed him the Relyan keychain. “He wanted you to have this.” Malik clutched it, nodding through tears. Faure approached Mira, voice low. “Thank you. I failed Yusef. But you… you saw what I couldn’t.” Mira shook her head. “We all hide from what we fear, Superintendent. Some more than others.” Yara, standing watchful, caught Mira’s gaze. “You think it’ll be different now?” Mira glanced at the pastel walls, the secrets still lurking. “Not for everyone. But for some, maybe.” Elias, packing up the mobile lab, looked back at the square. The tension in his shoulders eased, just a little. Celeste, collecting her notes, murmured, “Some stains never come out. But new stories grow, even in ashes.” The SCU left Marleaux as dawn broke, the sea wind carrying away the last of the smoke. The city remained, bruised but unbroken, its secrets given voice—at least for a little while. —

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